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  2. Submission by kuroinana Those Quiet Hours [Beyblade] - Multichaptered, WIP [4 chapters posted currently] Summary: Takao has been cursed with the ability to see ghosts and strange incidents follow him around. He meets Kai Hiwatari, a mysterious private paranormal investigator. He offers him a deal… and a new job. Pairing: Kai Hiwatari / Takao Kinomiya Genre: Alternative Universe (Ghost Hunting AU), Horror, Content Warning: This story contains mentions of upsetting death circumstances, such as suicide and murder (not yet on the current chapters posted). What I am expecting: I am after any type of comments, anything you found interesting in the story and characters. Any feedback on my language usage/grammar/etc is super useful since my first language isn't English (it helps me improve!).
  3. Okay. I reviewed: No Sacrifice, No Victory by Darkened-Storm [chapter seven] Get Inside by Zadien
  4. I'll update this as I go along, whenever I find time today to do stuff XD Unintentional (Aquila)
  5. Multichaptered pieces: Tears from the Heart (Darkened Storm, second chapter) Reign of Chaos (Aquila, first chapter) Oneshots: Get inside (Zadien) MaxEmily oneshots (shinobuwrites) Winter's End (Sakura)
  6. March reviewer's weekend is now in motion. Please visit for the the selection of stories this month: Remember, once you've reviewed a story, please add to 'Stories Reviewed' thread (under review exchange) Community Leader @Moderator @Senior Member @Member @Veteran Member @New Member
  7. So the February event has been pushed back to March due to hosts being unable to host the event (good old flooding). This date will now happen on the final weekend of March so there's a bit more extra time to sort out submissions. I'd also like to try and get a few submissions happening on Tazland Archives too (if possible), but I know most of us are gonna use A03 and FFN. @Community Leader @Moderator @Senior Member @Member @Veteran Member @New Member
  8. February 2022 - Reviewers Weekend [25th-27th] Here are the nominations for February, if something needs to be added or taken off do let me know, because this month is a little confusing. Also I'm late I'm sorry. If you missed out this month, you can add your nominations in the NOMINATIONS THREAD. Once you have reviewed a story, please name it in the STORIES REVIEWED THREAD. @Administrator @Moderator @Community Leader @Veteran Member @Senior Member @Member @New Member Multi-chaptered Pieces Beyblade No Sacrifie, No Victory - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13653885/1/No-Sacrifice-No-Victory Fourteen months after Tyson and the G Revolutions defeated BEGA's top five, the sport of beyblading has entered a new style of competitive play. But in the shadows of the new competition, a new beyblade organisation threatens to undo months of work by the BBA. Can Tyson, Max, Ray, Kai and their friends reunite to bring down this latest threat? Smells Like Team Spirit - https://archiveofourown.org/works/27438091/chapters/67074481 [WIP]The Sharks have always won the league, each and every year, but this year will be different. Kai Hiwatari, the ex-captain of the Sharks, now captains the Tigers, the talented yet dysfunctional contenders for the trophy with all their emotional baggage, prank pulling and bitter resentment of change. Time After Time - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13844811/1/Time-After-Time [Complete] Kai plays for the NHL and has just led the once jinxed Arrows to the second round of the Stanley Cup playoffs. Fantastic! Because of this, he's delayed seeing his girlfriend for another few weeks. [Nudging the door open, he leaned against the door frame and felt that soft, slow roll of emotion spread through his chest. "You're wearing the wrong colours, Ember."] College Professors - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13930501/1/College-professors The two beautiful teachers ruled the college with their beauty MaxEmily one-shots - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13916761/1/MaxEmily-one-shots [no description given] A Hero's Last Cry - https://archiveofourown.org/works/25477300/chapters/61800688 When a new world tournament approaches, trouble is never far behind. Once again Tyson’s title is under threat and Kai plays an important role in Tyson’s foreseen downfall. Can destiny be changed? NOTE --- My Beyblade season 4 fit. It's pretty tournament heavy, a lot of action and beybattling, but with a fair share of romance and drama too. Digimon Tri: Of Honesty and Loyalty - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13965515/1/Tri-Of-Honesty-and-Loyalty A series of vignettes running parallel with the events of Tri told with a fresh prospective. Where Dragons Roam - https://archiveofourown.org/works/31955611/chapters/79142029 [no description given] Zoids Tears from the Heart - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13655856/1/Tears-from-the-Heart When a Republican researcher goes missing in Imperial Territory, Van and co are dispatched to investigate. Along the way the uncover a conspiracy that threatens to spark the fire of revolution within the Empire Pokemon Turning A New Leaf - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13537126/1/Turning-A-New-Leaf After losing her partner Meganium four years ago, Amber gave up on being a Pokemon trainer. However when Professor Birch gets attacked and she unleashes his Treecko to save him, a bond starts to grow. On her journey, she crosses paths with many strange individuals. And maybe, one day she'll meet the man who took her partner from her. ----- NOTES: Darker than your average Pokemon plot due to being a nuzlocke-style world with Pokemon dying, with OHKO moves being fatal. As such, death can be expected later, Possibly more depressing than graphic though, as it'd be most likely Sheer Cold over Guillotine. A Crown of Thorns - https://archiveofourown.org/works/27018316/chapters/65957851 Lyra's life is turned upside down when bandits invade her town of New Bark. She's taken in as a slave, but is quickly sold to a noble family. It isn't long before Lyra finds herself in the service of the young and obedient Prince Lance. Will love blossom?. NOTE --- No real knowledge of Pokemon needed for this one as it started off as an original piece of work. It's a medieval fantasy setting with some pretty graphic violence in places. It's dark. Miserable. With limited moments of hope. It's a grim dark fantasy basically. Assassin's Creed Syndicate Reign of Chaos - https://archiveofourown.org/works/25279489/chapters/61287889 Evie supports her brother's plan to remove the Templar presence from London however she begins to question his methods, worrying he's straying too far from the Creed. After all, the road to hell is often paved with good intentions. NOTE--- Please note you need no knowledge of AC Syndicate to read this story. Just know that Templars are bad, and Assassins are good, and it's set in the Industrial Revolution in London. Basically an original story if you changed the names. Borderlands Sing to the Moon - Act 1 - https://archiveofourown.org/works/32007613/chapters/79281253 A not so faithful telling of Borderlands 1's story where werewolves exist, and Sirens are a special type of them, follow the adventures of the Siren wolf Lilith as she struggles through the tests Pandora has to offer to her. NieR Automata/One Piece Crossover Digital [R]eincarnation - https://archiveofourown.org/works/35881012/chapters/89467597" Rumors said that the Devil's Child Nico Robin had died, she thought so herself, so then why did she wake up again in a laboratory of some sorts, who were these people speaking of androids and machines? And what do they want from her? Ginga Ginga Densetsu Tora - https://archiveofourown.org/works/13328604/chapters/30508374 Post-Ginga Densetsu Akame manga. What if Hakutaka's first litter consisted of a single female after the Koga killed her brother? Follow the pawsteps of a growing Tora as she overcomes the hurdles life and the Koga throw at her. Jujustsu Kaisen The Shadow for the Light - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13956777/1/The-shadow-for-the-light When Kugisaki is the light, then Fushiguro is the shadow in her life [First FushiKugi fic, medieval set-up. Many side-pairings.] Original Material (not fanfiction) Shattered Memories - http://www.tazlandarchives.com/viewstory.php?sid=6 Rosa wants to live like any normal teenager with an annoying sibling despite her amnesia, which also strangely affects the voice in her head which calls itself Rio. However after meeting some seemingly familiar people, her and her younger sister Lily's lives get flipped upside down. And when they are both dragged into demonic conflict and her sister is taken from her for seemingly no reason, she cannot find her on her own---- NOTES: The overall story has a focus on severe mental health issues and will also have abuse of vulnerable individuals later into the story. There's also violence but it is not to an extremely graphic degree. The story is in the process of re-drafting, so chapters will be added as I go along, probably on a 3 per week basis. As the story is still being worked on, warnings will be updated if needed. Battle Cry of the Sunbirds - http://www.tazlandarchives.com/viewstory.php?sid=20 What would happen if God was not infallible? With an almighty but foolish God in charge, the noble birdfolk are often left to resolve their Father's mistakes. However sometimes that responsibility can be debilitating, as former general Prince Niko is forced to learn. Thankfully his best friend Ace, warden of the underworld, is there to help him pick up the pieces, even as the world begins to slowly fall apart --- NOTES: Heavy focus on mental health, with a protagonist in particular suffering heavily from past trauma and other characters inflicted during the plot. Will be some violence but few and inbetween, and not very graphic. One-Shots: Beyblade Get Inside - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13142711/1/Get-Inside A short drabble one shot revolving around character dynamics and how people show they care without having to declare anything. Breath - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13921387/1/Breath 'Salima, I like your breaths. I like to hear and see your breaths. It gives me self-satisfaction and happiness, to see you being alive and breathing.' The Plan - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13665916/1/The-Plan Hilary is sick and tired of waiting for Tyson to make the first move, so she turns to Kai for some help to get the ball rolling. NOTE--- Don't be fooled. This is really just a long one shot broken up into three chapters so read the entire thing first before reviewing. Digimon The House Under the Water - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14024642/1/The-House-Under-the-Water The night before the Chosen return home, Gennai reveals some interesting information about the Digievolutions BHNA A New One - https://archiveofourown.org/works/14763929 Hizashi doesn't feel right in his body, so researches and becomes a her - Hisami. Pokemon Origin of Harmony - https://archiveofourown.org/works/9360176 Side-story to Radiance, Fallacy, Dream of Destiny and more. #1 in Tamers of Legend. Silver spends a day talking with some wild Kalosian Pokémon and Xerneas itself. Even Alain drops by for a visit. How to Survive the Mafia - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13989989/1/How-To-Survive-The-Mafia What happens when a Rocket scientist goes for a walk with the lab Umbreon and gets mugged by a Rocket grunt? He has to get rescued by another, friendlier, Rocket grunt. When one wants to be a grass gym leader and the other hates his job but has no Pokemon of his own to save him from Rocket Wrath (TM), there's only one way for two teens to stay sane in Team Rocket. Unintentional - https://archiveofourown.org/works/28066701 A rogue pokémon sneaks into the Galactic headquarters. The commanders try and remove its presence before the boss appears, but it proves to be a challenging battle and a miserable one for Cyrus. NCIS Guardian - https://archiveofourown.org/works/32152279 Mike Franks is quicker to help Jenny and she doesn't die. AU of season 5 finale. Fairy Tail Right Beside Me - https://archiveofourown.org/works/14330025 Based after Ch 471 - With war looming on the horizon, Gray decides to take a quiet moment to give Gajeel some friendly advice, a warning just to be careful with Levy. But is that really necessary? After all, Gajeel isn't flirting with Levy.
  9. I'll just have "Why You Should Never Anger a Mafia Boy" removed from the pool, thanks
  10. Rather than repost links I’ve edited my origins post to flag changes, thought it might be easier for you to track that way. I also think it might be good to flag pieces that were submitted the month prior that didn’t get reviews so that people go for them first
  11. Replace "Rich husband, poor wife" with this. Since the said fic has gotten pacing and spacing issues with some gore content, I am wanting to pull that out from the nominations.
  12. Well my three one shots were reviewed and I have no others that need immediate attention, I'd have one for valentine's day I suppose, but I haven't posted it yet so I don't know if I can nominate it. The two long ones can stay.
  13. https://archiveofourown.org/works/31955611/chapters/79142029 I'll swap the Akame ga Kill fic for this one please.
  14. Hi all! Taking nominations for February over the next week. Next reviewing event will be held from the 25th of Feb to the 28th of Feb. I've made a few slight changes to how the reviewing pool will work based on feedback. If you would like to keep the same stories as January, please respond with NO CHANGES. If you would like to swap some stories out, please reply and let me know which stories you want changed. @Moderator @Community Leader @Veteran Member @Senior Member @Member @New Member
  15. Wrong place. This is for the stories you have reviewed from the Reviewers Pool. You need to post here > https://theartistszone.com/index.php?/topic/3337-nominations-thread/
  16. Chapter 12 is all set for Pokémon: The Galar Journey. Here's the link and tell me what you think. Pokémon: The Galar Journey Chapter 12: The Deadly Swordsman Sol!, a pokémon fanfic | FanFiction
  17. So I think that's all the reviews done. Here are the results: STORIES THAT DID NOT RECEIVE A REVIEW: STORIES THAT RECEIVED A REVIEW/REVIEWS: (if a story is a multi-chaptered, I'm counting that as 1 review - makes it easier) Once Every Purple Moon 3 A New Me 1 The caged bird and its source of trauma 1 Smells Like Teen Spirit 4 Time After Time 1 Rich Husband, Poor Wife 2 Shattered Memories 1 Get Inside 3 College Professors 1 Right beside me 2 A new me 2 All I Want For Christmas Is You 2 No sacrifice, no victory 1 Battle Cry of the Sunbirds 1 A Very Bladebreaker Christmas 1 Winter's End 1 Breath 2 The shadow for the light 2 Origin of Harmony 1 Why you should never anger a mafia boy 1 Tears from the Heart 1 Shall We Dance? 1 Tri: Of Honesty and Loyalty 1 Guardian 1
  18. Multichaptered Tri: Of Honesty and Loyalty - Darkened Storm (first chapter) The Shadow for the Light - Tsukuyomi Oneshots Once Every Purple Moon - Sakura Alexia Guardian - Wizarmonfan
  19. Multichaptered fics Zadien's Smells Like Team Spirit (first chapter) Darkened Storm's Tears from the Heart (first chapter) Oneshots Sakura Alexia's Shall We Dance? Zadien's Right Beside Me Sakura Alexia's Once Every Purple Moon
  20. I'm not super great at it, but I promise I'll try my best. For now I reviewed: Origin of Harmony by Copperfur Why you should never anger a mafia boy by Nocturna
  21. I haven't submitted any stories this time because I barely have any good fics from my side. But this is just a list of fics I have read and reviewed so far. Get Inside - Zadien Rich husband, poor wife - Tsukuyo Breath - Tsukuyo A new me - copperfur The shadow for the light - Tsukuyo (just finished one chapter)
  22. Okay... Tazland Archive ones Smells Like Teen Spirit by Zadien Battle Cry of the Sunbirds by Nocturna A Very Bladebreaker Christmas by Darkened-Storm FFN/A03 Winter's End by Sakura Alexia Breath by Tsukuyomi
  23. I will try to read all the fanfictions of the fandoms I opted, hence don't feel bad if your story hasn't been reviewed yet. I have planned to dedicate most of my time this weekend to read the pieces thus you will get some reviews dropped further. These are the ones I have read so far and they are reviewed from the account shinobuwrites [Both Archive and FFN]. One-shots 1> Get inside by Zadien [Beyblade] 2> Right beside me by Zadien [Fairy Tail] 3> A new me by copperfur [My hero academia] 4> All I Want For Christmas Is You by AquilaTempestas [Beyblade[] Multi-chaptered pieces- I haven't finished reading them fully but I will just mention how many chapters I've completed so far. 1> No sacrifice, no victory by darkened-storm [Beyblade- first two chapters] 2> Smells like team spirit by Zadien [Beyblade- first two chapters]
  24. What I've reviewed so far (good thing I got a head start due to this weekends circumstances) - Smells Like Teen Spirit - Time After Time - Rich Husband, Poor Wife - Shattered Memories - Get Inside - College Professors
  25. Others have started the event early so I did the same xD Will edit post with what I've read as I do so, I've been busy so maybe an early start was better So far reviewed: Once Every Purple Moon A New Me The caged bird and its source of trauma
  26. Alright, I am not having huge expectations, but just dropping in five stories to review. I am mentioning the summaries, genres, settings, pairings, and warnings (side notes for the required fics) too for some who might want to know beforehand. What I expect: I would like to know the personal appeal of the concept behind the fic, plot-pacing, plot-spacing, how the developments behind characters and relationships are, just a few words on my writing skills (also how it could be improved), presentation and coherence. Just a few critiques if the plot and relationships seem forced or natural. I am completely chill if all the aspects aren't reviewed and if it barely has any critiques with just a fun reviewing. Story submissions by Tsukuyomi [known as shinobuwrites in writing sites] SHORT STORY Breath -[Beyblade] Summary: 'Salima, I like your breaths. I like to hear and see your breaths. It gives me self-satisfaction and happiness, to see you being alive and breathing.' [COMPLETED] Setting: Modern era, Alternate Universe Genre: Angst/Romance Pairing(s): Kane/Salima Side note: This is a CPR fic. NOVEL The shadow for the light -[Jujutsu Kaisen] Summary: When Kugisaki is the light, then Fushiguro is the shadow in her life [ON PROGRESS] Setting: Medieval era Genre: Drama/Romance/Action Pairing(s): Fushiguro/Kugisaki, Itadori/Ozawa, Gojo/Utahime, Geto/Shoko, Yuta/Maki, Mechamaru/Miwa Warning(s): Graphic depiction of violence, few character deaths. RANDOM SUBMISSIONS College professors -[Beyblade] Summary: The two beautiful teachers ruled the college with their beauty [ON PROGRESS, will be completed in one more chapter] Setting: College set-up, Alternate universe Genre: Comedy/Romance Pairing(s): Kai/Hilary, Tala/Julia, Hiro/Queen (some slight Tala/Queen) The caged bird and its source of trauma -[Naruto] Summary: "All you need is happiness. Even when you are a caged bird, you can virtually free yourself by feeling mirthful, Neji. You are just virtually caged. By making yourself contended, you can come out of the cage." [COMPLETED] Setting: Medieval era, Shinobi setting, Alternate Universe [but inspired from canon setting] Genre: Hurt/Comfort/Romance Pairing(s): Neji/Tenten (some slight Itachi/Izumi) Rich husband, poor wife -[Beyblade] Summary: The most unfortunate woman married the one she desired, but things went into havoc when she was five months pregnant. Would it trigger her to get reminded of her tragic past or just move ahead? Would he be able to soothe her? [ON PROGRESS, will be completed in one more chapter] Setting: Modern era, Alternate Universe Genre: Angst/Romance Pairing(s): Kane/OC Warnings: Rated M for mature content references, Lemon, swearing, and weird behaviors. A lot of angst. Side note: I just added this fic because of the fewer reviews. I am placing this fic at the end due to obvious reasons, as I have mentioned in the warnings. So it's not really compulsory for anybody to read this fic.

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